Feedback on Visual Discourse Analysis

The feedback from the peer review session was overall positive and I am happy with it; the essay shouldn't need to many changes before I extend it with quotes. The overall strengths were the focus on context and cultural references as well as visual, linguistic and rhetorical mechanisms. However, it was suggested I could expand on the production process of the poster, for example where it was designed and the parameters of the screenprints. I could also add a little about the band, and my own opinion of the visual look of the poster; do I like it or not? I will take this into account and add a little when I update the essay.